最新高考英语作文专题之地点描写专题篇

2008-03-28 19:27
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写前输入：
1） 用于按空间展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：
above             in front of            in the centre of       on the left
across            below                    in the distance     on the right
beyond          nearby                   opposite to        over
also                further                  next to                on top of
up                  down                    close to               beneath
under          around               near to            along
2）有关地点说明文应该着重掌握面积﹑ 人口﹑ 位置﹑ 环境﹑ 今昔对比等。以城市为例：（请仔细体会下面的句子的精彩之处）
1．Our city covers … square kilometers
2．Our city has an area of …square kilometers
3．The size of our city is ... square kilometers
4．The population of our city is…
5．Our city has a population of …
6．Our city is located in…,
7．It is very convenient for you to come to our city…
8．You can take a bus, a train or a plane to….
9．The best way to experience… is to take a bus tour.
10．It takes … to take a bus from… to…
11．… is only a few bus stops from downtown.
12．… is within easy reach.
13．The city stretches itself lazily along…..
14．The city is well-known/famous for its…/as…
15．The city offers …..and a variety of …
16．Wherever you go, there are plenty of activities to choose from.
17．You can go on the city tours to enjoy the sights, taste the local food, explore the lively nightlife and learn about its history and culture.
18．If you are interested in …, you can…. If you prefer…, you can…
19．After exploring …, you can relax and enjoy a good meal in…
20．There’re … where visitors can find shade from the hot sun and a moment’s rest from the busy city.
21．A walk around …is a feast for the mind as well as the eye.
22．The city is home to …
23．The city treats visitors to (blue seas)…
24．… is a must-see for tourists, as……
25．The city, known as…, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.
26．…may explain why people spend so much time on trips to …
27．… reminds visitors that it is an important…
28．You are sure to have a wonderful time in….
29．Few visitors leave the city feeling disappointed.
教师点拨
3) 近几年的高考书面表达已经提高了能力的要求，鼓励考生多使用高级词汇和复杂句型，这样可以直接影响高考书面表达的得分档次。不过，如果考生是因尝试高级词汇和复杂句型出现的少量错误可以不扣分。同学们应该学会使用分词短语﹑with复合结构 ﹑定语从句﹑ 强调句型﹑ 感叹句 ﹑倒装句和it作形式主语等复杂句型。具体的地说有：
As we can see , …
It is well-known to us all that…
It is∕was… who∕that…
It is∕was ＋adj.∕n.＋ for ∕of sb. to do sth.
so …that …                                too … to …
with ＋n.∕ prep.∕v-ing.∕v-ed., ……
How ＋adj.∕adv.＋subject＋be!             What＋adj.＋n.＋subject＋be!
因此，只要考生准确地使用了以上这些高级词汇和复杂句型，就一定会增强文章的表达效果，也就一定能在高考英语的书面表达中获得较为理想的成绩。
范文欣赏与学习
范文1：江苏卷2004假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括表中的内容:
自然情况 位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住
成就 经济发展迅速，新建了不少工厂、住房、道路
存在问题 水、空气污染，交通拥挤
对江城发展的看法 (内容由考生自己拟定)
注意: 1. 回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。
2. 词数120左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
3. 参考词汇:经济economy n.
Dear Bob,
It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.
The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.
In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future.
Yours,
Xiao Hua
范文2：全国卷2006（I） 假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。
注意：1.词数100左右;      2.可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯;      3.开头语已为你写好。
June 8
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. ____________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
内容要点：
1.图书馆的位置：前有花园，后有教学楼
2.内部环境：宽敞、有书架、报刊、书籍等
3.图书馆功能：借阅、借阅数量和借期
4.开放时间
5.合适的结尾
June 8
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.
Our library is in the center of the school. There is a beautiful garden in front of it and our classroom building is right behind it. The library is big. When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects. There are also lots of newspapers and magazines. We borrow books and do some reading in the library. According to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep them for 10 days. It is open from 9 a.m. to 7 p.m. from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends.
We all like our library very much.
Best wishes.
Li Hua
四川卷2006 假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Nick 将于八月来四川旅游，特来信询问有关旅游景点情况。请根据下表所提供的要点，写一封回信，并表示盼望他的到来。
旅游资源 许多世界著名的风景名胜，如：
九寨沟（海子；清澈见底；色彩斑斓）
都江堰水利工程（2，000多年历史；仍在发挥作用）
相关信息 气候适宜，交通方便
注意： 1.词数100左右，信的格式及开头以为你写好（不记入总词数）。
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇：省份—province     海子—lake     都江堰水利工程—Dujiangyan Irrigation Project
Dear Nick,
I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Sichuan in August._________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
应试技巧点拨
1. 首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。
2. 列提纲，使要点条理化，统筹安排布局。
3. 勿要直译，需意译。尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。
4. 要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的词句不要写，确有把握的可以锦上添花。
5. 遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化表达。
6. 注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了达到词的限数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。
7. 注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚，书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。
8. 最后注意复查全文: 看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写、汉语拼音是否规范，是否有语病等。
书面表达中学生常见错误类型
一 要点散乱型——不着边际胡乱写；
二 逻辑混乱型——多出现在语句或情节描绘中；
三 语法不通型——一般出现在语句中；
四 误用词语型——语句中用词错误
五 粗心大意型——不认真阅读提示，或错写内容或丢三落四
六 喧宾夺主型——不分主次信马由缰丢掉主要内容而将非主要内容大写或特写
李华父亲的朋友陈伟是在美国居住多年的华裔。因陈伟的儿子陈小明明年要来大陆李华学校学汉语，陈小明来信询问学校情况，以下是小华回信的内容。
1．听说你明年来我校学习，我们很高兴。
2．我校是一所具有80年历史的老学校。
3．学校很美，有许多花草树木，两座教学大楼，一座宿舍楼。
4．学校设备优良，有体育馆、计算机室和大图书馆等。学生除正式课程外，还有许多选修课，如：油画、打字、烹调等。
5．最重要的是，学校有许多优秀教师，课程有趣，老师既有知识又和蔼，非常愿意帮助我们，我爱我们的学校，我真希望你也能喜欢我们的学校。
参考词汇：选修课：elective   体育馆：gym 宿舍楼：dormitory building
Dear Xiao Ming,
I was excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school. Now let me tell you something about our school. Our school campus is beautiful. It has many trees, flowers and a lot of grass. We have two very nice teaching buildings and a dormitory building. In addition, the school has excellent equipment, such as a new gym, a computer room and a large library. There are also a lot of electives to choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking. Above all, there are many excellent teachers in our school. Classes are interesting, the teachers are kind and knowledgeable and willing to help the students. I like our school. I hope you will like our school too.
Yours
Li Hua