买私家车利弊

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  Today we can see cars everywhere.More and more people have cars.Our lifes have changed that it's more(这里没看懂……不过改成because of就可以通顺了) science and technology. In the one hand(改成On the one hand),cars have many advantages.It can makes us more convenient(我倾向于把这里改成"bring us more convenience"。英语里面一般来说我们不说谁很"convenient",这和汉语思维有点不一样).We can drive it where(改成drive to wherever就可以了。drive a car在语法上没有错,但是很少这么用。drive本身就足够说明在开车了) we want to go.It can save times(改成time。时间不可数,但是时分秒可数) so that(用and就好了。so that通常表示结果或者目的。放这里好像不大合适吧~) we don't have waiting(改成have to wait for。1、表示不得不或者必要的意思的时候,用have to;2、表示等待什么的时候用wait for) bus(改成buses).We don't have unbrella or raincoat(这里同学是想说“就算下雨我们也不用带雨伞或者雨衣”吗?那应该改成"don't have to carry an umbrella or a raincoat with us"。记住可数名词的单数形式一定要视乎情况和定冠词或者不定冠词一起出现,不能单独出现) when rainning.Cars help us very much. In(改成on) the other hand,cars make accident(改成have accidents。注意区别中文思维和英文思维) easily.It will make traffic jam(改成"we have traffic jams because of cars").We havn't(改成haven't) opportunities to take exercise.(换成逗号) So our healthy will broke(改成break) down.The most important(插入"things is") that the more cars(插入一个逗号) the more pollute(改成pollution,动词不能和冠词以及形容词连用).We must protect our environment. In my opinion,we can park cars far away from somewhere where we want to go.We drive cars when rainning.We can go to work by bike in the shinning days.Let's protect our surroundings.