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n       1.审题

n       2.构思

n           段首句；举例。

n       3.动笔

n       4.检查

n       1.三段论；

n       2.文章开头尽量避免错误；

n       3.写好第二段基本层次结构；

n       4.多运用关联词语；

n       5.不能说空话，要举例子。

n       例文评分。

n       1.六级作文不要乱喊口号

n       We must be honest and faithful to our classmates, party, country and the whole world .

n       2.文章内容要展开，注意举例子和分析原因。

n       （1）举例子

n       （2）分析原因

n       （3）万不得已凑字数

n       1.The methodology suggested may not guarantee the ultimate success, but the eventual pay-off could be worth the effort.

n       2. Achieving even partial success will benefit mankind and contribute to creating a better world.

n       1.大量看范文。

n       2.关注段首句的写法和举例子的写法。

n       3.适当的练习。

n       1.大量看范文。

n       2.关注段首句的写法和举例子的写法。

n       3.适当的练习。

n       1.开头直接切入正题。

n       2.议论文第二段的主题句要写好。

n       3.第二段要分层次展开。

n       4.用名言、举例、解释等手段充实第二段内容。

n       5.结尾要干脆有力。

n       第一段：起始段。

n       第二段：展开段。

n       第三段：结论段。

n       第一段：引出现象或引出话题。

n          引出现象——阐述题；

n          引出话题——观点对立题。

n           现象  phenomenon；

n           话题  issue。

n       模版句1：

n       People in growing numbers have become increasingly aware of the seriousness of the phenomenon.

n       模版句2：

n       There is a growing concern over the seriousness of the phenomenon.

n       举例(03.12)： the waste on campus

n       There is a growing concern over the seriousness of the waste on campus.

n       People in growing numbers have become increasingly aware of the seriousness of the waste on campus

n       模版句：

n       Whether something should or should not be done is a much debated problem in that it affects many people (in their everyday life).

n       举例(2000.6)：

n       Whether the test of speaking English should or should not be taken is a much debated problem in that it affects many university students.

n       举例(97.6)：

n       Whether job-hopping should or should not be done is a much debated problem in that it affects many people.

n       正方观点：

n             Some people argue that

n       反方观点：

n             Others, on the contrary, claim that

n       正方观点（97.6）：

n       Some people argue that doing one job does good to one’s career development.

n       反方观点：

    Others, on the contrary, claim that job-hopping helps one acquire wide scope of knowledge and accumulate more work experience.

n       我的观点：

n        Careful consideration leads me to believe that

n       I tend to think that…

n       It seems to me that…

n       I am of the opinion that…

n       I would take view that…

n       第二段主题句：

n       The explanation for this phenomenon may include several factors and I will express only a few of the most important ones.

n       The reason why I cannot accept the job offered may include several factors and I will express only a few of the most important ones.

n       三个层次：

n           first of all;

n           in addition;

n           furthermore.

n       first and foremost,

n       besides,

n       last but not least

n       In the first place

n       In the second place

n       In the third place

n       个人层面

n       1.个人的兴趣爱好

n       Doing something is of great interest, for it adds color to the dull routine of everyday life.

n       （02.6）A great many university students are fond of surfing online.

n       Surfing online is of great interest, for it adds color to the dull routine of everyday life.

n       As a result, a great many university students indulge themselves in the internet.

n       2.丰富/提高生活质量

n       Something helps to improve the quality of people’s lives.

n       例：The use of private cars helps to improve the quality of people’s lives.

n       3.运动健身

n       Regular exercises benefit both the body and mind.

n       4.社会责任感

n       Doing something will develop one’s strong sense of duty.

n       5.参加活动，培养团队合作精神

n       Participating in activities can develop a sense of team spirit and cooperation.

n       6.人际关系

n       Doing something will enhance mutual understanding.

n       例：Talking with my roommates will enhance mutual understanding.

n       7.个人能力和职业发展

n       Doing something will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career. 

n       例：Working hard will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career.

n           Getting proper training will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career.

n       例：Working hard will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career.

n           Getting proper training will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career.

n       社会层面

n       1.促进经济发展

n       It helps to improve the economic strength. 。

n       例：The recent policy helps to improve the economic strength.

n       2.自然和社会资源

n       It will lead to great extravagance of natural resources and social resources.

n       例：Clear cutting will lead to great extravagance of natural resources.

n       3.科技发展

n       It is a symbol of human progress and it extends the scope of human thinking.

n       例：The development of science and technology is a symbol of human progress and it extends the scope of human thinking。

n       4、交通

n       Too many cars running on the streets lead to air pollution and noise pollution.

n       5.教育

n       好处之一：Get oneself acquainted with the latest development in science and technology.

n       好处之二：Broaden one’s scope of knowledge.

n       6.旅游

n       The tourist industry has played an important role in meeting the cultural needs of the public and carrying forward national culture.

n       7.综合状况

n       The progress of our society is based on harmony.

基本思路：

主题句+解释+举例（进一步拓展延伸）

n       Topic:

n       Some people suggest that the government should invest a small amount of money, others think the museum is a financial burden? What do you think of it?

n       主题句：

n       一个东西给我们带来的好处，对我们产生的影响，或人们普遍的对这一事物的看法。

n       主题句举例：

n       博物馆可以记录国家的历史

n       1. Museums play an essential role in recording a country’s history.

n       1. Admittedly, museums, of course, play an essential role in recording a country’s history.

n       对主题句解释：

n       博物馆有很多代表一个国家过去的艺术品。

n       2. Museums usually have great collections of artistic objects which are the symbols of a country’s glorious past.

n       2.As is known to the world, museums usually have great collections of artistic objects which are the symbols of a country’s glorious past.

n       举例：

n       故宫博物馆里有很多文物。

n       3. For example, the Forbidden City Museum has a collection of antiques.

n       3. For example, the Forbidden City Museum has a huge collection of delicate antiques of artistic and historical value.

n       进一步拓展：Museum对人们的影响

n       影响之一：通过参观博物馆，人们可以学到关于历史和文化的东西。

n       4. By visiting museums, we can learn a lot about our history and culture.

n       4. It is widely acknowledged that we can learn a lot about our history and culture by visiting museums in our leisure time.

n       It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.

n       It is universally acknowledged that…

n       It is well accepted that…

n       It is widely believed that

n       It is generally maintained that…

n       继续引申：

n       有很多好处，例如可以完善人格.

n       5. A clear understanding of our history and culture does good to the development of well-rounded character.

n       5.It is a clear understanding of our history and culture that does good to the development of well-rounded character.

n       2006.12 首次英语新6级作文题——The Importance of Reading Classics（ 阅读经典的重要性）

n       提纲：1.阅读经典对人的成长至关重要；

n                 2.人们越来越少地阅读经典，原因是……

n                 3.作为大学生，你应该怎么做。

n       主题句：

n       1. There are a lot of reasons for it.

n       理由之一：学生缺乏兴趣·内容过时

n       2. In the first place, many college students take no interest in reading classics, for they find classics outdated.

n       理由一的延伸：

n       3. In other words, classics do not meet with their requirement of reading.

n       理由二：学生太忙，没时间阅读经典著作

n       4. In the second place, nowadays ,many university students are occupied from morning till night.

n       5. As a result, it is quite difficult for them to squeeze some time to read classics.

n       理由二的延伸：

n       6. Since many students dedicate themselves to studying the course work, they pay no attention to reading classics.

n       理由三：经典著作比较深奥，让人疲惫厌倦

n       7. In the third place, the contents of classics are usually filled with abstruse concepts and ideas.

n       理由三的延伸：

n       8. Therefore, college students invariably feel tired and bored in the process of reading.

n       总结段落结构：8句话构成整个第二段

n       ①主题句

n       ②理由一

n       ③理由一的延伸

n       ④理由二

n       ⑤理由二的延伸

n       ⑥理由二的进一步解释

n       ⑦理由三

n       ⑧理由三的延伸

n       ①improve people’s living standards

n       ②increase the government revenue

n       ③improve the image of our country

n       ④increase reputation and upgrade the status in the international community

n       ⑤enhance mutual understanding

n       ⑥play an educational role

n       ⑦maintain world peace